Update our film

Update our film:



          We already finish the filming,but we discover some problem that we need to update and improve.I am going to shows what problem we got and some analysis the codes and conventions  during the filming.


  This clip give us Mise-en-scene,showing a man is doing something.There are coffee machine,radio and napkin behind him,which give us information he is setting in the kitchen and probably at home.His clothing is suit and he looks like an office employer-this scene might be when he finish the day work and come back home.




                                                   
         In this part,we can hear diegetic sound which the girl relaxes her neck.The establishing shot is close up,it give audiences a sense of that she is tired and what does she profession and why she looks so tired. Mise-en-scene --We can see there is a ring on her hand,proving she might be married.Also,her nails are red and it gives us feeling that she is a typical woman's character of film noir.









The establishing shot is long shot, giving the audiences a sense of it is setting in the house.

                                                           
       
 We can see there is a coat on the left of the picture,which is our mistake.
We didn't realize that coat behind the characters and just focus on our filming,I think this is certainly seriously and it only a small detail so that effected the whole film.

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